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Review:Debra20 says:
Heya!

Your Snape/Lily stories have been praised to me more times than I can count. So here I am. I know I'm starting little but I do plan to review your novel Snily. On to the review then!

This little piece is very very heart touching. It might be me, but did you portray Snape to care a little for Harry? Or at least he seems concerned about him if he dies and won't be there to be able to protect him. A major factor in this is Harry being Lily's son of course, but there's something about the way you wrote it that to me shows a little bit of concern for Harry outside his love for Lily.

It feels a bit strange to read Snape's thoughts in a poetical way. It is certainly new and not how I picture him but the way you've managed to pull it off is incredible. His trail of thoughts seem to break every time you introduced the parentheses. There's a great variety of emotions going around him. And you managed this in exactly 500 words. Unbelievably!

Author's Response: Hey! Wow, you've heard things about my Snape stories? That's... pretty cool, actually. :P The novels in question are actually Snape/OC (though, of course, hints of Snape/Lily are touched upon), but it you ever wanted to check those out that'd be really awesome! And reviews aren't necessary, of course; if you read them at all, I'm a happy, happy girl.

I think Snape cared for Harry out of obligation and guilt -- I don't think he ever genuinely felt anything for him, not really. He's such a complex character, and I can't even pretend to know everything about him, but I am a very firm believer that he only protected Harry because he was loyal to both Dumbledore and Lily's memory. That's why he was so horrid to Harry in the books -- he looked like James, and Snape couldn't stand it. That's how I see it, anyway. ;)

I'm so happy that you enjoyed this story! This was another story that I wrote in a pretty short span of time, and at midnight, no less, so your comments about the poetic style and emotions really are so appreciated. And I love writing these 500-word stories! :D Thank you very much for taking the time to leave me a review on this! ♥


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