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Review:Shortie says:
I started a Bloody Baron/ Grey Lady novel. But I must say, everything I've wanted to say in a novel, you've said it here more beautifully, artistically. This is a very VERY nice story.

'I will never return, as long as I live' This line is my favourite because it shows all the irony in the story. Of course she didn't. She came back after her death. Beautifully said love :)

Also you language is very fitting. "I love you so" "Damn you" "Six and twenty" clearly show the ancientness in the story even though you haven't said it. Like I said very very artistic.

I love your characterization. I love the way you've portrayed Helena. She is everything you've explained. Great job there.

Also, I love the fact that she says, "I regret everything" That shows why she turned into a ghost without passing on into the next stage of afterlife.

All in all, no mistakes found. Great GREAT job love.

You're a great author :)

*Hugs*

Author's Response: WOW! Thank you so much! I don't know what to say except thank you so much, this is only my second review ever, and to know that you liked what i wrote makes me so happy :D
I'm so glad you lied it, and i can't wait to see your novel! I've thought about expanding it, but i'm not nearly committed enough to write more than one chapter xD
I'm glad you liked how i portrayed Helena, she was difficult to write because she's very unlike me or people i know (thank godric!)
I'm seriously over the moon (maybe even Neptune) that this story is actually getting a response, so again, thank you SO MUCH!
*hugs*
~Gill


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