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Review:Maybe says:
This was totally amazing. It like, serious blew my mind man. Lily is such a babe - hey, I tan even in the winter too, omg. And James is so hot. He's not a toerag after all. Omg so sweet.

Seriously, I love this so much. I died laughing when she said "Take your mask, and take my heart." I mean, everything about this story had me cracking up. The way Sirius spoke was hilarious, and just the whole thing with the messing up the hair, tanning in the winter, the thick blode hair, the fact that Sev isn't that nice anyway but duh, he's her bestie. Everything, everything, everything, everything and everything. And by that, I mean everything - was hilarious.

I commend you for writing this monstrosity, it must have taken a lot of work. You deserve ALL the love (unless you're a toerag, and then you def don't deserve it.) Brilliant.

-Maybe

Author's Response: there is nothing to say there's not still uv ray action happening in the winter, most people are just too weak and cowardly to go out because it got cold or something. peasants!

i did put considerable effort into playing up as many cliches as i could from the marauders era, because that era used to be something i enjoyed reading so much and then i felt like a lot of authors tried to write it just because it would attract a crowd, and because of that the quality suffered and they went for the obvious plot points, that were easy to read.

hahah i hope that i'd pass the toerag test :D thanks for your review, glad you enjoyed.

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