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Review:Aphoride says:
I really enjoyed this! First off, I'm a huge Bill/Fleur fan - ever since Fleur was eying Bill up in Goblet of Fire, if you can believe it! I always thought they would go together so well... :D

Ah, this was so bittersweet, I really liked it! You combined the fluffiness and the angst of different parts of it so well - they just fit together perfectly. It's something that's really difficult to do, so kudos to you for that! :D

I also really liked how you used the different sections, showing different sides of both Bill and Fleur, different stages in their relationship and throughout the war. It filled it out so nicely and allowed you to include a lot more without lessening any of the emotion, if you know what I mean.

I loved how you wrote Bill and Fleur and Mrs Weasley and... well, all of them, really. They all felt so well rounded out and real, you know, and I felt like I could understand where both Bill and Fleur were coming from with their arguments and conversations and things. You wrote Molly so well, too - I've tried writing her and I find it so difficult. You make it seem so easy! :)

I liked how you touched on the idea that they got married without knowing if either of them would survive at all. It's something that I'd never really thought about before, and this actually made me think about that. It was a bit of an 'oh yeah, that's true' moment.

I just really enjoyed this - it was so bittersweet it was perfect.

Aph xx

Author's Response: Ahh this review was so sweet it made my day ♥. I see so many flaws in this and it needs to be edited so badly, your review has pushed me to want to do so.

Fleur is an intoxicating character to write, she is so wonderful because I feel like there are so many sides to her!

Thank you again for this amazing review!!


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