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Review:Singularity says:
I just love Neville, so it was exciting to read a story about him and his brief stint as an Auror.

I thought you captured him especially well at the beginning when he was doubting himself and his abilities, especially as compared to Ron and Harry, but managed to remind himself of how awesome he is, and went out and proved it again.

I have to wonder, is an unforgivable curse allowed in auror training? Does it make a difference that he was using it against a magical creature as opposed to another witch or wizard? Just a thought.

I thought this story was really creative, and you did a good job of utilizing the prompts without making them seem forced. The ending made me laugh out loud. Really well done :)

Author's Response: Hi, Singularity! Thank you for stopping by to read and review. :)

Hmm, I don't think an Unforgivable Curse is really taboo in something as serious and hardcore as Auror training. Essentially, they /are/ Dark wizard catchers, so they've got to be prepared to use whatever spell possible to apprehend the bad guys. But in this instance, using Imperio to make the dragon fall asleep is pretty harmless.

I'm glad you liked the way I used the prompts, and thank you for calling it creative! That's so reassuring to hear. :) And ha, the ending was my very favorite bit. ^ ^


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