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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Oh. My. Gosh.

That was bloody amazing. The title itself is just fantastic, but the story...man, this has got to be one of the best founders I have ever seen.

Its not hard to believe that you managed to put ALL the prompts in the story, but to make them work so well...how did you even manage? The dragons, the wands, the everything!

I really liked the dragons parts in the story, I can just so imagine them roaming around the Hogwarts ground. My favourite part in the story, though, would probably be Salazar, himself. You gave us another take on him, he seems less evil and more noble on this one and you made it all believable.

I honestly think there is not enough words to describe how amazing, fantastic and perfect this is.

Bloody amazing!
Izzy xx

Author's Response: CloakAuror9,

Wow! You give me wonderful compliments! Thank you!

The title does sound a bit obnoxious, doesn't it? But really, it was my way of including a bit of the House Cup in there. LOL!

I don't think I've ever read any founders stories, so I don't really have too much to go on as far as Salazar (other than he didn't want Muggleborns in the school and had a Baskilisk). That doesn't make him totally evil, does it? Haha!

We had very little time to write these and truly I think the prompt for 'flourishing in the face of adversity' is what inspired the brother vs. brother for Hogwarts storyline.

And... I just love dragons. I wanted to not only mention the uses of blood as required, but to actually USE IT as a plot point and be important to the story. :P

My biggest problem of all was fitting it into 2500 words! I had to trim and trim and trim and still have it make sense.

Well, anyway... thank you so very much for your wonderful review of this story. It really means a lot to me and is so very encouraging. :)

Sincerely,
Dark Whisper



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