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Review:apocalypse says:
Hey!! Wow! Really, wow! This was an amazing story! I really liked the entire plot and the way you wrote it! It was a marvelous idea and I really enjoyed it. When I read a one-shot, I usually expect one scene from someone's life or something like that, but this was a whole story packaged into a single chapter! I loved the entire concept, great job! I think you've done a good job with Salazar's character. He's somewhat different than he's usually portrayed as, so it was a nice idea to do something different and unique. :) The only thing I was unsure about was his fear of the Dark Arts. I don't think he'd be that afraid of something that's kinda second nature to him, you know? I hope you know what I mean. :) Anyway, great job!

Go Slytherin!! :D

P. S. I noticed that you're kinda exceeding the word limit assigned for the task. It's not a huge deal but you'd want it to be perfect, right? :p Just thought I'd let you know. :)

-Cal

Author's Response: apocalypse,

Ah, wow, thank you! It was so much fun writing this story. I'm so glad that you liked it and thank you so much for mentioning how it is a full story in one chapter. :D My author heart thanks you!

As far as Salazar's character... I have never read a Founders era story, so I have no idea how he is characterized. :) I'll have to change that now that I've started to love Salazar now. Tee hee.

As far as fear of the Dark Arts. For this, I felt that his brother accused him of that, but he doesn't fear it really, he just doesn't want to die. It's that Slytherin self-preservation that has him wanting to 'live to fight another day' instead of fighting to the death. But honestly, I have no idea about him. LOL! *shrugs*

And thank you so much for keeping me in check for the word count. The story is actually 2497 words (3 words to spare) and the rest is Author Notes that they don't count.

Thank you so very much for your support. It is so much appreciated!
Dark Whisper

Go Slytherin! :D

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