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Review:Jchrissy says:
Oh goodness m'dear, this was positively absolutely adorable. You did an amazing job with keeping Fred and George themselves but much younger versions. It was so sweet how he wanted to offer his brother a lolly but didn't have any. Am I confused, or did they actually destroy the bed because they couldn't fit it in the closet? Please tell me they wouldn't do that and I am confused... haha!!

I love that George wanted a baby dragon, I feel like it could have been hearing his brother talk about them that made him want once, which seems very natural and realistic.

I also really liked your mention of the other brothers, their characterizations also seemed flawless.

A very sweet and adorable first chapter all together! It flowed beautifully and made me want to click on to the second!

Author's Response: Hey, thanks!

You can be confused. The bed comes later. :) I always imagined these two to be very close, watching out for each other in everything that they did. It starts young, so I wanted to explore that a little.

Little kids dream big, so a dragon was the one "unattainable goal" I thought George would go for. Glad you liked it!


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