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Review:LittleWelshGirl99 says:
Mehehe, I've stolen my brother's laptop today (which is far cooler and faster than mine, although I'm going to overlook the skull stickers everywhere) and decided to celebrate my sneakiness by reviewing meh favourite gal's new chappie! ♥

This was just the most perfect way in the history of perfected perfect-ness to have Bill and Fleur's first date! Homg, the way they were fighting for control and trying to act dominant (;'D) they reminded me of a couple of headstrong primary school kids. AND I LOVED IT! I couldn't imagine it any other way.

All the descriptions, the way you link together so smoothly, the characters~ it's just so fabby Lottie! I particularly love this description- 'She was a calm lake with no ripples of anger or hurt, just peaceful stillness inside.'

AND THEN OH NOES WHY YOU HAVE TO GO AND DO A ROTTEN CLIFFIE? YOU SMELL :P

He's gone? *launches herself onto bed and sobs* Has he left her or has he been kidnapped? (Or would you say man-napped?)

Loved it as usual you talented thing, you. xox

Author's Response: Ahha that laptop sounds AWESOME 8O Send it to me so I can update faster, skull stickers and all? And aww thankyou so much Annon! :D

I'm so glad you liked their first date! It took me so long to perfect it because I wanted to capture their characters so much in this turning point, but in the end, I just couldn't imagine doing it any other way either! :D

Mehe thankyou!! I do try to keep it all smoothed together but struggle most of the time, so I'm glad there's not a weird imbalance or anything. Aww thankyou :D

YES, ROTTEN CLIFFIES KEEP PEOPLE HANGING *evil laugh*

You'll find out soon(ish), don't worry! Just think over certain prewritten events... ;)

ooh thank you so much for this lovely review! :D
~Lottie xoxo


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