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Review:classicblack says:
Hi it's Ali with your review!

I'll comment first on how well you described how the brothers found out about Antioch's death. It really did tie in the with the Tale of the Three Brothers. The first brother dies of power first. Very well done.

This story really adds a whole other meaning and depth to the Deathly Hallows story. The fact that it is realistic and ties in with what happens in the 7th book also adds depth.

Frankly, the only way this story can be improved is with thorough editing for typos and perhaps making some or your paragraphs shorter (it makes the reader feel as if each chapter is a quicker read).

Personally, I can't wait to see how Dom adjusts to living in 1234, how hers and Ignotus's relationship develops, and how she will handle her knowledge that both his brothers will die. Hopefully, you'll be able to handle it well, although, I have little doubt that you will.

Wonderful chapter. It's been a pleasure reviewing your story. Feel free to rerequest anytime.
Happy writing,
classicblack from the forums

Author's Response: Awesome! Thank you so much!

Really, thank you so much for your reviews. I found them so helpful, and I hope that you enjoyed the story as you read. Your time and effort put into this really means a lot to me, and I greatly appreciate it!

I may be back in the future with another request. You were truly so helpful, and I love your honesty. Thanks again! :)


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