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Review:Elenia says:
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I love your Rose! She's so bubbly and joyous, her narrative was fun to read. You also did a great job with Al, he was very supportive and an awesome cousin for helping her out so much.

Few little spelling errors and then some punctuation errors, but they're all very easily corrected. You really should take a look at the Writer's Resources at the forums, that's really helpful when it comes to grammar! I found so many good tips there that helped me. Because good grammar always makes the reading experience more enjoyable (:

Other than that, I think this was a very nice start! Maybe try adding more a bit more description, that would improve everything even more ^^

Good luck writing!

~Elenia

Author's Response: I love Rose too, she's Brill as is Al :)

Thank you for the lovely review and I shall be off to the writer's resources now :D
-Potterfan310


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