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Review:Jchrissy says:
I think the ending is great! You have a very good concept. Rose being pregnant with twins and running away to America, not giving Scorpius a chance to make things work, just basically needing to get out, and adding Al to it is great.

I think that you really love this story, that is obvious to readers which makes it more compelling.

I do think you could benefit from a Beta (We all could, I have one too) just to help with punctuating dialogue, the flow, and simple stuff that would make it a smoother read :)!

I hope they are twin girls!!!

I also loved the emotion in the goodbye scene. You put so much of your own excitement into writing, it's great to see someone enthusiastic about their stories!

Author's Response: Thank you :D
Already got a Beta except this cahpter hasn't yet been done.

All will be revealed when she goes for her 20 week scan - coming up soon

-Potterfan310


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