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Review:LittleWelshGirl99 says:
Y-you wrote this in an hour? -runs away to weep- HOW? JUST HOW ARE YOU SUCH AN AMAZING PERSON, YOU?

I suppose you can't really answer that without seeming egotistical but I WANNA KNOW YOUR SECRET 8D Let's leave it as a rhetorical question then.

Just, everything about this. It was so wonderful, you captured the essence of Percy incredibly. I think this line was my favourite 'he was the middleman, firmly planted between the great, and the ordinary'. It's so true of Percy- he's stuck in the middle with people to prove himself to and people to look up to him, and follow his lead. The middle is a hard place.

Nice use of parentheses, by the way! I've experimented with them before as well, and it's a fun writing technique to play around with. I like how you managed to incorporate it into the story.

What a lovely story Jane, slightly melancholy but so very /Percy/. Gah :3

~Annon x

Author's Response: That first paragraph made me laugh so much! ♥ And then, of course, it was hard to explain WHY I was laughing... I mean, I was at work and this story sort of emerged. And that's all I know how to tell you! :D

I love that line, too. :) I'm so happy you liked this! I feel a lot like Percy: Bossy, ambitious, stuck in the middle. Sometimes it's difficult, and I think one of the best thing about the Potter fandom in particular is that there's always someone to relate to.

Ah, I've recently come to adore stylistic parentheticals! I don't really like them in normal, standard prose -- I feel like it detracts from the flow of the story -- but if you're using them with a set purpose, I'll gobble them up. :P

Thank you so much for being willing to come by and read this! It seriously made my day so much when you said you would. And I'm so, SO pleased you enjoyed it! ♥ You are tremendulent. Full stop.


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