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Review:Allison says:
I nearly died laughing while reading this. Seriously, every single line was hysterical. My favorite was probably, “It’s okay,” she said. “Really, that sort of hatred can only lead to marriage.” That line sums up an incredibly number of fanfic stories. As do the lines about Remus never being around, Peter being forgotten, and Sirius being a player. Oh goodness, anyone who calls themselves a player is just so ridiculous...

I don't know why some people write stories with characters like these and expect anyone to take them seriously. MarySues as the OC main character...ugh! This parodied all of those awful stories perfectly. Well done!

Best Hp fanfic parody story I've ever seen! The level of hilarity and snark was perfect. Also, the title is fantastic!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much, particularly the "Really, that sort of hatred can only lead to marriage" line. That's one of my biggest pet peeves in fanfiction, to the extent that in my review thread on the forums, I refuse to read stories in which Lily treats James - well, like this. Come on, guys - she didn't like him all that much early on, but don't go overboard. :P

Also, agreed completely about calling oneself a player. :P

Thank you so much for the review, and I'm glad you liked the story! :)


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