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Review:firefly910 says:
DID I NOT SAY THERE WOULD BE DRAMA!!

Oh this chapter is definitely one of my favourites.
I don't think you could get any more misinterpretations of two people's feelings in this chapter if you tried!

There Beth is thinking Snape's all in love with Lily and has been using her. WRONG!
And then Snape thinks Beth has decided to support the whole blood purity thing. WRONG AGAIN!

I feel all of this drama is just a little too much for me!

You wrote it perfectly.
"Beth, please." I almost died at that moment.
YOU HAVE ME FEELING SORRY FOR SNAPE WOMAN!!
WHAT IS THIS SORCERY?!

They really do need their heads banging together.
Of course it is never going to work anyway.
She is light and he is dark. . . they do not mix well.


Now a little something made me go all giddy at the beginning of this chapter.

'and maybe someday find someone else'

*flails at the thought of what is to come*


This review probably didn't make any sense what-so-ever so I'm going to go ahead and read the last chapter and try to leave a coherent review on it!

Author's Response: DRAMA INDEED. And, yeah, I'm going to go by what I said in my last review to you -- I think that if Severus and Beth actually took the time to talk things over, and weren't so insistent about hiding their feelings, they'd be a lot better off. :P But alas, where would the plot be then?

Ahaha, you, calling out their wrongness. I am grinning so much right now. :D Sympathy for Snape was exactly what I was going for, yahoo! I have succeeded! ♥ (You and your Siribeth shipping. :3)

I've left my share of incoherent reviews, and this is nothing compared to those. :D Gah, I'm still so happy you read all these chapters! Thanks a million times over, Callie!

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