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Review:WitnesstoitAll says:
I see what you did there. ALWAYS. Very, very clever. I am still a bit stunned that you wrote this withoug any e's. If it were me, I'm fairly sure I'd still be on the first sentence. :P Honestly, the wording didn't at all seem like you had to settle for terms to avoid the letter at all. It was gorgeous, sort of distorted -- but it is snape's dying thoughts so I suppose that distortion is to be expected. All in all, this one shot reminds me why you are so fabulous. You managed to write a gorgeous one shot with a serious limitation on your writing.

In closing, I want to point out this line because it is my favorite (you know what a sucker I am for pretty words): "You still imprint all I do, and am, and want. It is for your son - Harry is only your son, Lily, and you cannot fault my mind for thinking it - that I am still in this world at all, as you wait in your unknowing always. It is for you."

All in all, this is fantabulous.

Author's Response: I will start out this response by saying how very, very glad I am that 'always' didn't have an E in it. That would have been massively tricky to work around. :D I kind of like the distortion, too -- and it's really great that it doesn't seem to wonky or misplaced, either. That's actually a huge relief!

Ooh, people always seem to pick out some of my favorite lines. And I think Sarah liked that one, too! Baww, you guys. ♥ Seriously, thank you so much for taking the time to review this, Mel. It means so much to me that you're willing to stop by my author's page. :3

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