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Review:Broken Butterfly says:
This is written really well. I love how through Lily's perspective, the story really tells the last moments of Severus's life and his death. It doesn't need gore or description of what occurred because that is explained in the books. What your story provides is a connection between Lily and Severus. Their friendship, the pain that Severus caused her, how even though she doesn't know why she forgives him for everything. the connection between them is evident. In the end, when he sees he in her heaven is beautifully described but it could use more description on Snape's feelings a little, how Lily would know how he was feeling. One thing that does strike me as slightly odd is your reference to heaven. Seeing as that is a christian term, and Christianity has no reference to the books I may consider changing it to afterlife or paradise, not actually using the word heaven. Other than that This was amazing.

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for stopping by!

I'm glad you could see a connection between Lily and Snape and felt like you could understand their friendship and the feelings between them, both unspoken and spoken. I tried to focus more on Lily's feelings here, which is why you didn't get a lot of Severus's side, and I'm glad that you enjoyed that.

Hmm... I can see what you're saying. I don't consider myself an especially religious person, so I wasn't thinking of the Christian idea of heaven per se. Also, the books don't really preclude the idea of a religious afterlife. Thanks for your comment, though.

I appreciate your kind review! :)

-Amanda

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