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Review:LittleWelshGirl99 says:
AHH ALL MY FEELSEYS! This was so undescribably cute- talking in a broom cupboard?

NINJA FLEUR IN DA HOUSE YO.

Did I ever tell you how awesomely you write Gringotts in this? WELL IT'S TRUEE. I can feel the whole workplace atmosphere, with the office hierarchies and everything.

Fleur's accent again! It's so charming! I keep sort of pretending to be her in my head and 'Fleurifying' normal sentences so that i can, you know, get into the mood of the story xP

‘Treat ‘em mean, keep ‘em keen’

NO NO NO NO! FLEUR DON'T TREAT BILL MEAN HE'S TOO MUCH OF A SWEETIE! (okay yes a very flirtatious sweetie and not the sort of sweetie I'd give to my kids to eat, but.) But at least they're Allies now! Allies is better than nothing, allies...means a team.

Wow, I know the definition of allies.

Oh wiat, he's not going out with Sara right? He's taking Fleur to dinner! BACK OFF SARA.

EHHEEE I LOVED IT. I LOVE YOUR WRITING LOTTIEE.

Stupidly excited for next update :3
xox

Author's Response: Ahh FEELSEYS FTW! I have to admit, I just described to screw all the angst and throw in CUTNESS for the first half - I just cannot keep up extended angst *hides behind Hufflepuff pillow*

Hey, ninja Fleur - I can so see her going undercover :'D Y'know, when I next hit a huge wall, I'm going to write that story about ninja Fleur, it needs to be written!

Hee THANKYOU! It took me so long to work out originally, so I'm glad you liiike it and it was worth it ;)

I DO THAT, except it's to work out how to say them! I'm glad she's charming with it, though, since I sit at the laptop saying sentences over and over again, trying to get the inflection...

Ohh I know, she's so mean :( but in a sad way, and Bill is sort of bringing it out in her... Still, allies they are! And clever Annon for knowing the meaning *pats on head*

Nope, not going out with Sara, though I do need to sort out the details with her. And yep, Bill is taking Fleur to dinner :D

EEEHEE THANKYOU 83 THANKYOU

Ahha I hope it will be soon! I'm trying to write them, anyhow!
xoxo


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