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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
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This was a very touching look at Bill and Fleur and the dangerous circumstances in which their relationship began an the obstacles they had to overcome.

You had very nice attention to detail, and in particular I must complement you for conistently portraying Fleur's accent the way it is in the books, which certainly wouldn't be easy.

The one minor criticism is that the jumps btween scenes sometimes could feel a bit abrupt, but I have no complaints about the scenes themselves, which did a great job of evoking emotions.

Overall a very well writte story.

Author's Response: Hmm, I will be sure to look over my scenes and see if I can make that transition any smoother! Thank you for pointing that out!

I'm happy you enjoyed the story, thank you so much for the read and review!


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