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Review:caoty says:
Wow. This is... fantastic. I love your characterisation of Remus here, and I think the pace of the story - that constant frantic struggle between dreams and reality coupled with the longer moments of visiting the Potters' grave and the birth of Teddy - works well in supporting that. They mesh well together, is what I mean.

I especially, especially love this line:

She can never know just how truly selfish he is.

Because of course Remus would think himself selfish. And of course he'd act selfishly and hate himself for it.

And now I have nothing constructive to say, and I'm fairly certain all this gushing does not make sense, so I hope that this was an ego boost for you at the very least and that you get constructive, non-fannish reviews. Well done. 10/10, and all that.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for stopping by! :)

I'm really glad that the pacing and flow of this worked for you, and that you felt like I characterized Remus well. I have this habit with one-shots of just kind of writing what comes to mind and then doing sparse editing at the end before I submit it, so I'm always a little worried that the flow will be imperfect.

Yes, that's exactly how I picture Remus, self-deprecating to a fault. It's his defense mechanism to keep people away, and ironically, I think it's what draws fanfiction writers to him. Like Snape and Sirius, for some people, he begs to be 'fixed'.

Hey, I don't think there is ever anything wrong with leaving a gushy review, as long as it's sincere. You should just say what you want to say when you review, you know? Thanks so much for all of your lovely compliments! :)

-Amanda


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