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Review:Ever says:
So, so, so, so, so cute!:D The end just made me do a little fangirl worthy squeal!

I think the imagery and your emotions were your strongest points! Thankfully, these are two of the most important aspects of writing, so you have already got a good thing going!

I only saw a few minor grammar errors, so thats pretty good too:D

To be perfectly candid, I don't really read any bill/fleur, but for whatever reason, this one called out to me. I think you thoroughly gave me a good opening and first view at Bill and Fleur in the FF world(:

Perhaps a sequel? I'd love it:D

I think there should have been more at the end, but thats because it was ridiculously adorable;D

Oh, and I particularly liked the Drunk duded/Fleur/Gabrielle situation. It was an unexpected twist, and I think it was a clever way to have Fleur display she would remain strong and protect her family no matter what the cost!

Great piece, thanks for the read!

xx

Ever

Author's Response: Ever, thank you so much for review!
Considering how much I loved your Lucius and Narcissa story, I would have to say our review swap turned out pretty successful!

I loved that scene, also. Fleur is always played as an idiot, overly rude, those kind of things, but her traits that make her such an amazing character seem to be ignored. This gave me a chance to really show not only could she stay strong in a terrifying situation, but that protecting family was important to her.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! I hope to make my way to more of your stories soon!!


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