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Review:BoOkWoRm24 says:
Hi so this has been on my to read list for a long time, and then I went on my favorites list today and saw you reached 99 reviews. I just couldn't pass up this wonderful excuse to procrastinate on Nano.

Anywho, I thought that this chapter was just as good as the past two. I like how you're continueing with the whole quarter of each chapter is from each marauders point of view.

The characterization of everyone was fenominal. I totally got the whole Sirius is mischeivous, but still nice, Peter is a follower, Remus is a werewolf, and James is spoiled feeling from this. I feel like you've opened up a huge window for growth for the characters as obviously James isn't this spoiled little boy by the time that he reaches seventh year.

I also like how you're working in all these little back stories while you write. You've got some back round on the Sirius-Kreacher animosity, some backround on the whomping willow, some backround on how the laundry is done at Hogwarts- all these little details that you don't generally think about when reading the books. It really makes you think about all the little things that everyone's overlooked in the books.

Anyway great chapter, great story, hopefully it won't be another month until I get around to chapter 4 :)

-BoOkWoRm24

Author's Response: Hello!

THANK YOU FOR BEING MY 100TH REVIEW! You deserve a hat! (I would say a wand.. but I'm all out.) xD

I'm so sorry for this extremely late reply! I've just finished my last exam which means I finally have time to respond to your really kind review and begin to start writing the next chapters! :)

The four POVs will hopefully continue until they start to... 'drop off' (:() - it means that I can easily continue their story until there's nothing left to tell.

:O! Thank you! Characterisation is my main focus, and I'm so glad that it's coming across! Hogwarts is the place where they grow and become the adults that they should be - it's going to be fun to write it!

Thanks for reviewing, and I really hope you continue to enjoy Mischief Managed! I hope your NaNo is on target?!

Keira :)


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