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Review:Ron 4 Hermione says:
A good chapter, I like how her sister is there for her even though they weren't that close!
A few tips for improvements:
- Capital letters, an I on its own should be a capital I not a lowercase I. People's names should all start with a capital letter "moll" should be "Moll".
-The structure of the paragraphs- "miss you too mol,bye. (new paragraph) I chucked my phone onto my bedside table..." This could all be one paragraph.
Having a better on the first two chapters seemed to help so it might be a suggestion to get another one. If you would like I would be your beta-just PM me :)
Hope this helps and it is really a great story! 9/10

Author's Response: Thanks for the offer :) and advice
-potterfan310


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