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Review:Ron 4 Hermione says:
Interesting chapter- I like how she is worrying about telling her friends and not just her family and her boyfriend which is normally the case.
A few tips to help you:
- Capital letters, an I on its own should be a capital I not a lowercase I. People's names and titles should all start with a capital letter "miss Weasley" should be "Miss Weasley" and "rose" should be "Rose".
-The general layout needs adjusting, you don't need to start a new paragraph after people have spoken if the next part is just narrative.
Not a bad chapter 9/10 :)

Author's Response: Molly becomes a worrier, worrying how people will react and what they will say and do. Will they accept her as pregnant or will they shun her from their lives.

Thanks for the tips :)
-potterfan310


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