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Review:Cavell says:
This was actually a really lovely start to the story - I would have liked just a bit more description, but your dialogue flows well and sounds realistic, so that's okay. I love your characters so far; Tiffany is so rebellious but in truth she's just so scared, and James is always a sweetheart and Jacobs is awesome ;) I have noticed one thing, though - your spacing is really wacky, and there's a huge space between the review box and the author's note, so you might want to fix that. I can't wait to find out what happens next, though, so update soon!

Author's Response: Awww Thank you so much! - You have literally made my day! Yeah someone else said about that so I'll work on it! :) Thank you! Tiff sure is rebellious, but she's so completely different really than how she lets on! It's so much fun writing her as there is soo much I could do with her! James is just adorable isn't he! I have to keep reminding myself it is an Al pairing, NOT a James!! ;) Yeah Jacobs is pretty cool! He is so much fun to write though; he's just so immature! :D
Yeah, it's something that happens whenever I go to submit something...I've got a CI being made for this so once it gets sompleted I'll put it in and edit the spacing and any spelling mistakes ;) I've got at least half the next chapter written so I just need to finish and type it up and it'll be in the queue, hopefully by the end of the week :)
Thanks for the review hun!
-Julia x

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