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Review:SerpentineOffering says:
I like the idea of summing a year up per chapter, it makes a very interesting read. The thought that you could fit a whole year into it would make one think you wouldn't be able to get all the detail you would need. You did. Perfectly. There was a great balance of Paige herself and the others around her which I enjoyed.

I am really starting to like Paige, she seems different than the rest, not hung up on the trivial things like some of the other girls. You've done a wonderful job developing her character while also keeping to Severus' character which is amazing.

Great job, Amanda!

Recenseo

Author's Response: It was tough to fit a whole year into each chapter, but I still think it was a neat way to do this story, and people seemed to respond well to it. It's great that you also seem to agree.

I did try to make her a little different, and it was fun to explore the differences between her and all of the other people around her. The father-daughter relationship is one of my favorite things about this story, and so you'll be seeing more of that in future chapters.

Thanks for another great review :)

-Amanda


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