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Review:Bluestreakspirit says:
I absolutely loved Sarah in this chapter. The way she was explaining this all to Millie just made Sirius seem so adorable - I cannot WAIT until they finally work it out. Is Millie ever going to tell Sarah that she and Sirius are (semi-)faking it? I feel like Sarah would be a great go-to girl for that.

I was a little displeased (not to sound snobby!) by the Sirius' POV because it just seemed SO unnecessary, even of it was kind of cute. It's just hard for me to get my head out of Millie's mask and into Sirius' so quickly (especially when they are on such different trains of thought) when it's not essential to the story.

I am really looking forward to the Potters' house! :) I think I'll go reread this whole story now because I don't even remember the deal with Millie knowing Mrs. P already. Thanks :) Toodle-o!
-Cat

Author's Response: I really wish that there was more of Sarah in this story. I feel that because Lily actually has a real boyfriend, she just wouldn't be able to relate, and you're right - Sarah would be better for 'fessing about their relationship.

However, I reckon I can give her a bigger role later on in the story. Ideas, ideas...

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