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Review:Jchrissy says:
I think Phoebe is a very funny and creative character :)! This chapter had more detail, and your dialogue flowed naturally. That is something a lot of writers have trouble with, but your conversations didn't sound forced.

Just remember to edit and punctuate :). The correct grammar goes a long way to helping a story sound smooth.

The father has to be Scorpius, right?! :)

Author's Response: Thank you for the review :D
I love writing Pheobe and I'm glad you Like her :D

So far the 1st chapter has been beta'ed and hopefully the other 2 will follow in the next few weeks.

You'll have to read chapter 3 to find out :)

-potterfan310


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