Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:
He just wasn't Ron if he didn't protect Hermione.

^ WHY DO YOU INSIST ON TRYING TO MAKE ME WEEP? Uh! I love this. I love this. I love this. I'm struggling to find other words because I simply can't make this review:

I LOVE THIS. I LOVE THIS. I LOVE THIS. I LOVE THIS. I LOVE THIS. I LOVE THIS. I LOVE THIS. I LOVE THIS. I LOVE THIS. I LOVE THIS. I LOVE THIS. I LOVE THIS. I LOVE THIS. I LOVE THIS. I LOVE THIS. I LOVE THIS. I LOVE THIS. I LOVE THIS. I LOVE THIS. I LOVE THIS. I LOVE THIS. I LOVE THIS.


A bright light seemed to be born within him as Hermione kissed him, and he kissed her back with almost startling fire. She was his, and he was hers, and together they were a burning beacon of all the best things in each other.

Hermione had ignited within him a fire that there was no chance of stopping, and Merlin, he was going to stay by her for the rest of his life. There was never any other light but her.

^ AH! The fire and the light. The light and Ron's illuminator and the light and the connections! I love connections. I love connecting things. How did you even think about that? That's amazing. You're amazing.

You make Ronmione so sweet. No better than that you make Ron a person! A sweet, sweet person. You give him his qualities and you dig deeper into his character and bring to light the inner thoughts of Ron that are just so true and wonderful and breath taking.

A-MA-A-Z-ING! :D I loved this and I loved OW&W. I wish there was more!

Author's Response: Aww Deeds, that is so sweet of you :3 (I honestly wouldn't mind if the entire review was like that!) And I'm only half trying to make you weep... the other half is trying to make readers love and adore Romione like I do and wanted to put their lovely relationship across 83

I'm so glad that you like all the light and fire and deluminator connections! I love spotting them in other works and I just wanted to bring in all this imagery to show how much Hermione stands out for Ron (although I may have taken the literal glow a bit too far :P ).

YAY! Ron is so often written as this 1D character and I really really wanted to try and make him stand out and be his own character, before I tried to mesh his personality with Hermione's. They've got to work by themselves but also as a couple so I tried really hard to make that show! I'm so glad that you find him real and believeable, and not overly verbose (since I'm far too wordy for blunt Ron and had to cut back quite a bit :P )

Eep THANK YOU SO MUCH 8D Your reviews on them have made me so happy, and you know what? Maybe one day I will write more! I just don't have any ideas in the present ;) THANKYOU FOR SUCH A GORGEOUS REVIEW :3


Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 945
Submit Report: