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Review:Charlotte says:
Hi,

This is a really well written thought provoking story. I haven't read many Bill/Fleur stories but I have always loved them. Your story certainly made me think about how their relationship was and I feel that you've captured their relationship very well.

The only thing I found was this "Harry’s arms (no, Fleur’s) [tighten] around him momentarily" It seems to me that it should be [tightens] not [tighten].

Have you ever thought about doing a sequel to this about the moments instead from Fleur's point of view instead of Bill's. I think that that would be really interesting to read.

Mystique

Author's Response: Thank you for leaving a review -- and thank you even more for doing it so quickly! I'm very pleased that you enjoyed the story, and although I haven't written much Bill/Fleur, I've become more inclined to their pairing in writing this. Which really should be what fan fiction's about, in my opinion.

I see where you might have gotten confused, but the direct object in that sentence is 'arms' and it wouldn't make much sense for me to write 'arms tightens'. Thank you for being such an astute reader, though! Really, thanks again for the review, and I hope to see you back before long. :)

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