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Review:dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap says:
As far as I'm concerned, Andromeda is dead

^ I didn't expect you to include that into the story. Andromeda getting married and being disowned I mean. I figured once Narcissa got out she would want to see her father and her sisters, moreso Andromeda than Bellatrix because she's never around but I was wrong.

The way she described him this time was much more calming to me. I didn't think he was a scary figure but more of an eerie one which is silly, I know.

I thought no one could come into the house and then leave it? How could that person apparate into the house and then vanish?!

Author's Response: Until this point, Narcissa's main goal is to get back home. If she's preoccupied with getting back home, her heart's not really going to be in the here and now and there is no chance of her breaking the spell. So she had to see Andromeda's marriage as a betrayal, to make her not care about going back anymore.

Eerie is good. :) This was around the time I was trying to transition Lucius from beast to man.

That one person is a mysterious individual who cannot be trusted. I shall say no more!

:3


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