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Review:charlottetrips says:
I want to say that you worked well with the heavy emotions present in this story. I kind of had to think of them as not Draco and Hermione because I don't like Hogwarts-era Dramione and with that I was able to really see the emotions that you put on display. Young love burdened with great weight. It was good of her to be able to be there for him and to make a tough decision something worth facing.

There were ver few grammatical errors which could be easily found in a once through.

The song I think was particularly apt given the movie that it was in and the context you are using it in now. The bittersweetness of their last time together, where Draco decides to give Hermione his last secret could almost be felt by me. Sure it was a touch overdramatic, but I think young teenage love is always like that.

I like that you got me willing to suspend my disbelief for this brief one-shot.

xChar

Author's Response: Dramione was my "lets see what I can do with this cliche" pairing, just because it was fun. I'm glad you were still willing to read. :)

Thank you for a lovely review.

Sam.

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