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Review:BoOkWoRm24 says:
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Alright so I'm going to be honest. When I first read your request I was a tadd skeptical. Remus and Sirius were never two people that I would pair. However given that I think that you've written this ship quite well. You made me believe that it might actually happen, and at the same time you stayed completely to the cannon. For all I knew this could have been going on behind everything, and we just never found out because Harry never found out.

I liked your characterization of Remus. Everything he felt seemed very realistic. I liked how you put him with Tonks because he wanted to be near Sirius. That seemed like him. You also incorperated a good amount of self loathing in there and that it him.

The one part I was unclear about on was whether Tonks knew about him and Sirius or whether she just knew that they were exceptionally good friends. This came about when she offered to name the baby after Sirius.

Other than that one bit of confusion the entire thing was virtually errorless. I didn't see anything wrong with grammar/spelling, flow and pacing were perect, everything was perfect.

Anyway keep up the good work :)

-BoOkWoRm24

Author's Response: Hi! I'm sorry this response has taken ages!

It's so great that you found this believable. It was tough for me to write this, because Remus/Sirius isn't one of my favorite ships, and I felt like I had big shoes to fill, trying to write a story like the ones Missy had written. For you to say that it could fit into canon totally makes my day. Thank you so much!

I'm glad the characterization and plot worked well for you. You make a good point about Tonks -- I only meant to allude to their friendship, but I can see how it could be confusing. Thanks for pointing that out.

I appreciate your very kind review :)

-Amanda


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