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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
Ooooh now I read this because I really want to see where everything was going to go and I must say I was not disappointed.

Hermione has changed a lot in this chapter from the woman we saw at the beginning of this story and I truly feel we saw a darker side to her today. Ron could tell something was wrong with his wife and I think that it was very. good in a way that you made her imperiurise him. It was extremely interesting though that Ron thought it was a Horcrux of sorts.

The way she treated Harry really wasn't good but it worked and showed the change even more. Harry's theory about it not being a horcrux is good. I just like the idea of his whole mind being in there especially because we sort of know that he was completely evil!

Tennant... well i don't really know what to say about him apart from it was very clever of you to bring him up again to just remind us that he's there.

The whole scene with Goyle and Rosier was awesome! Its nice to see the tension and just how far they'd go. The blood boiling curse well using it to some extent on Rosier was amazing

Well done

Author's Response: Hello, again!

Things are starting to move at a very fast pace as we roll down the hill into the end of the story. Hermione is not herself any more. Things have gone very, very wrong for her, and she's struggling to regain some control over her anger.

I'll give you my standard line that I have been giving Alyssa for two consecutive review responses: the book behaves like a horcrux in most ways that matter. Beyond that, I'm not really able to say.

Yes, I basically just wanted to jog everyone's memory on Tennant. He's about to become rather pivotal.

Rosier is still exactly the man that Tenabra felt such disdain for a few chapters back: pathetic, clinging to his blood status and living a life utterly devoid of accomplishment or distinction. And Hermione's anger definitely puts him in his place. I had to tone that scene down quite a bit to be sure that it would make it through validation.

Thanks so much for your awesome reviews! I really appreciate them all.

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