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Review:HappyMollyWeasley says:
Hi!

This story is beautifully written. You caught my attention from the very first paragraph. Oh, how it must hurt him to go through the transformation into a wolf each month. I think the picture of Sirius being the only one who dared to be with him during that time is believable. Sirius was indeed very brave, boarding to reckless.

Oh, poor Remus! I wonder how much Tonks knows, or guesses, about his feelings towards Sirius? I would have loved to see some more interaction between Remus and Tonks to get their relationship right. I guess that I would have loved to read more about Sirius and Remus too.

This is a sad story, obviously, but it's also very beautiful. I love your style of writing, and I like this one-shot a lot!

Author's Response: Hey there! I apologize for taking so long to respond!

I'm glad the very first scene caught your attention, because I worked hard on it. It's great that you picked up on my hints about their friendship and the similarities they shared.

Several people have commented that they wanted to see more Remus/Tonks, but for me, this story wasn't really about them. I definitely wouldn't rule out the possibility of writing a Remus/Tonks later, or even another Remus/Sirius from Sirius's perspective!

Thanks for your very kind review :)

-Amanda


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