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Review:Ravenclaw_Charm says:
Hi, I'm here from the BvB Battle! :)

Another great chapter! Pepper's narration is just so amusing - you've got me hooked :)

Hugo is hilarious. I love how he's just running around the entire chapter, snapping pictures of anything. If only there was a social network for Hogwarts...haha, I could see Hugo posting those pictures and tagging Pepper in them ;)

I love all your characters! Your characterization and descriptions are great without being overwhelming. I just noticed a couple grammatical mistakes but nothing too major ;)

I really enjoyed reading about Rose and Pepper's friendships - they are just too funny together! Also, their beauty mishaps are great. Pepper would be the one to use the potion without a reversing spell, haha. Also, I love the use of the list (did I mention this already?); it really adds to the humor and narration.

Anyway, awesome job! :) Keep writing!

Author's Response: Hi there! Thankyou so much - I'm really excited that you're enjoying it :D

Haha, I love writing Hugo so much! And I so wish there was one too, because that is a brilliant idea that would be absolutely hilarious... poor Pepper, though, if it ever happened!

Yay, thankyou! I'm really glad that they're not too overwhelming, and I think I need to edit this chapter too :P

Hehe I love writing them so much, so I'm glad you like reading about them together! Yeah, I just thought that that particular mishap summed up her personality pretty well... and yay! It's fun to write but I'm never sure if it's a bit intrusive :P

Thankyou so much! And I will :D


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