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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
This story was... in the least hard to read

The iudea of Rose not remembering what had happened was in the beginning quite painful because you knew she was going to have to remember and that would be more painful within itsself.

At the same time though not mentioning Octavia such as where she was and whether she was okay really unnerved me because at the end of the day she is a child that has been kidnapped by the bad guys and you don't actually know what they may have done to her or even in fact if she is still alive.

Also the torture... it makes me stand on edge because I know Rose actually doesn't know anything and its really heartbreaking to see her have to go through the pain. The idea of her having a small safe haven so she doesn't break though is very very interesting as it shows how strong she actually is but also emphasises a mothers willpower.

The interaction between Draco and Scorpius in this seemed to be one of confusion because everything moved so fast when they were in the bar and then taking Mr Goyle outside. Maybe that was just me when I was reading it, but at the same time I sort of liked Scorpius' innocence within the story.

Even though there are dark times returning once again he still hadn't even considered unforgivable curses and it shows by him saying he'd never seen his father perform dark magic before even in front of his grand father.

Astoria! I really do like her. First of all she comes to the rescue and then we find out that she knew what was going on even thoguh Scorpius and Draco had gone through great lengths to hide it from her. What an amazing woman!

The scene with Esme and Harry was almost heart breaking because you sort of described their transition in their relationship and about how now rather than things being awkward between them that Harry considers her to be an equal which is a really nice thing to see.

The bit about Katrina really really is heartbreaking because I thought it was her but after all this time its not! It's one of those things where I think you've done really well to make us judge Katrina and decide for ourselves that she did it. I just want to know now who Lady Tenebra is...can we have sort of a scooby doo unmasking please!

Go Rose! I am so las she stayed and made up a story to keep her close to her daughter because thats what any mum would do!

I like this :)

Author's Response: Hello, there!

So I'm sorry that this chapter was difficult to read, but in a way I'm also glad. This chapter was necessary to tell the story, I believe, and it wasn't meant to be fun. I was trying to emphasize that this is a war, and people get hurt in wars.

I promise that I won't make you wait very long to find out what happens to Octavia. She is the source of Rose's strength, the reason that Gamp can't break her. I thought it was an inspiring message to work into this.

There is a lot that Scorpius is still learning about his father. I'm still trying very hard to portray Draco in a very even-handed way that's consistent with the books. Not too evil, not too good, but very committed to doing what he must to take care of his family. Hopefully I'm doing alright.

Astoria to the rescue! I was so pleased as I read your story to see that you've cast her in such a sympathetic light. I've really tried very hard to make her Draco's better half in every sense of the word.

Harry and Esme's relationship is evolving slowly, as I'd expect given their age and their history. But he is the person she turns to when she's overwhelmed by the tragic circumstances of Katerina's death. And Tenabra will be unmasked soon! I promise you.

Rose is as strong as she needs to be for Octavia. Let's hope it's strong enough...

I'm glad you liked this chapter. It was one that I was worried many people wouldn't like because of the scenes with Rose and Gamp. It wasn't fun to write, but it's integral to the story. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

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