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Review:RosieQueen says:
It's Rosie with your requested review! :)

I really enjoyed this! The first chapter did a good job luring readers into the story. And you also conveyed the mood perfectly. The reader knows exactly what the main character is feeling and doubting, so good job!

Remus' characterization was wonderul. His personality, his actions, they were pretty much the same as in the books. The main character was introduced wonderfully, and that is very difficult to do in just one chapter. While reading, I actually started to think I knew her!

I only noticed one little typo: "Come afterward," it should me "afterwards." Definitely not a big deal, I still really enjoyed this chapter! I can't wait to read more of this, especially because of the cliffhanger. So all in all, a wonderful strt to this story! :D

~Rosie

Author's Response: Oh, I'm really glad that you liked this, especially Remus's characterisation - I get so nervous writing canon characters, because I really don't want them to be OOC.

Afterward and afterwards are actually interchangeable - either works. :)

Thank you so much for the review!


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