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Review:HappyMollyWeasley says:
I can really feel the war going on when I read this chapter. The constant fear and suspicion of everyone... Can she really trust Reagan? Is it safe to let the owl in?

It is strange that Jane, who seems to be clever, doesn't suspect the truth about Remus. Or is she?

I have trouble giving you a proper review, because I've only got praise to give you... I really like your story so far (and I'm a bit choosy about what I like and don't like, really!)

The pace is good, slow enough to let us feel the creepy war feeling, and fast enough to capture my interest. :-)

Author's Response: Oh, good! I'm so glad to hear that, because that's exactly the mood I'm going for but I wasn't sure whether I'd managed it. I want to really convey that sense of mistrust and unease throughout the entire story, because it does happen during very difficult times and the plot is kind of dark as well.

Jane is fairly clever, and she will figure out the truth about Remus eventually. The issue is really that being a werewolf is just not something that Jane even considers when she's thinking about people she knows and likes - she's not prejudiced, exactly, but she thinks of werewolves as being so different from her that it really doesn't occur to her that Remus could be one. That will be a problem for her later... ;)

Thank you so much for your review!

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