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Review:agenth says:
I hope you will update again, this story is too awesome to be abandoned like this now!

I really hate what Sophia and James did.
I don't like fake relationships at all, it is just too messy.
The only time it ends up good is when the people fall in love with each other.

But I really like this storyline.
Though sometimes I think that the press is too exaggerated.
Since all other stories barely mention the press, I guess it's okay to be over the top in this instance.

I really like Albus' and Sophias friendship from the flashback.
Albus is sooo adorable! I want to hug him.
I think he's right though, since Sophia and James behaved like that in front of the press, it's no wonder that things are crazy like that.
Yes they did it for a good cause,
but apart from Lily, nobody knows it, so I can't blame Albus at all for what he said.
On the other hand Sophie probably feels overwhelmed.
I mean 3 years of acting have caught up to her.

I hope my review sparks you to update soon enough,
since this story is too interesting to leave alone!^

Author's Response: Thank you SO much for this review! I really appreciated that you enjoyed the story enough to critique it like this--and honestly, you hit the nail on the head with a lot of your points!

About the press, its kind of hard to write about it, because I am not a celebrity and don't have to deal with it. But part of the reason they are so exaggerated is because it is being told from the viewpoint of a teenage girl. But I also really wanted to highlight the obsession that (I assume) the wizarding world would have with Harry and his family--and Sophie by extension.

I'm really glad that you like Albus, and that you understand where he is coming from. I was worried when I started writing this that he would be hard to like because he is critical of the way Sophie and James have acted. But I think that just means that he is a very straight-forward person and doesn't understand the whole situation.

On the other hand, Sophie just did what she thought was right--oh, the humanity!

Anyway, thanks for the review! Just for you, I will try to get an update out by this weekend :P


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