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Review:LittleWelshGirl99 says:
Ahh, I hav just been absorbed by this story. I'm going to be thinking about it and reading it over and over for the rest of the day, I can tell. I absolutely love stumbling across gems of fanfiction and when I do, I just feel so happy and, strangely, satisfied. It brings all my emotions into one big jumble :)

I LOVE THIS. SO MUCH.

The phrasing of every sentence, the layout, the characterisation. It's completely taken my breath away 8). I was literally crying (mascara gloop everywhere now :)) by the end.

'The sky above was as blue as his eyes, the clouds a match to his snowy beard. All the world was painted on his robes.' Every line of this was perfect, really, but this is just one that I'd like to press *favourite* next to and keep forever. Albus wasn't just a Headmaster, he WAS Hogwarts- he was the embodiment of trust and hope and /love/. He was the whole world :)

asdfhekegfw. It's all so perfect!! I can't believe I haven't read this before!! This is a work of art to be proud of :)

-LWG

Author's Response: Wow! Just wow! I can't believe that this story ended up being so powerful and lasting for readers - I never thought it would have this effect, but I'm so pleased that it has. It's the ultimate compliment to have written something that sticks with people even after the story is ended. So thank you for that - it's really made my day. ^_^

Oh no, not mascara gloop! Now there's a warning that should exist for stories - "be advised to remove all mascara before reading this story". I have to admit that writing this story made me cry - when Minerva's emotions started rolling out, I had to keep stopping because it was just too intense, the story becoming too real. It's a very strange feeling when a story does that, and I worried that it would detract from the quality, so it's a great relief to hear that it hasn't, but has instead added to the experience of reading.

He was Hogwarts - that's so true! His time as headmaster there is only a drop in the bucket of Hogwarts' history, but his personality, his power as a wizard and a human being, is incredibly huge - it would fill whatever space he chose for himself, and thus it filled Hogwarts, every stone and every person within it.

Thank you so much for this review! I can't thank you enough for it!


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