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Review:Dare to Dream says:
So here I am Minding my own business in writing class, writing the next chapter in my story when I decide to innocently go on HPFF and BAM what am I greeted with? A chapter update from Beth! I squeal a bit and my harry potter fan best friend Jeff looks at me like I’m insane and asks what’s that matter I put my hand to his mouth tell him to sh as I scroll down to the last chapter and begin to read.

However to my dismay you did not update you little fibber!

UPDATE!

How ever I did realize that I did not review! =O So here I am reviewing the chapter I want to murder (but not really cause YOUR AWESOME) you over.

Let’s begin shall we?

I’m still not sure who the person is that attacked Gen however I am certain that it was them who made her broom all wonky! AND THAT IS NOT OKAY!

My list of subjects are:

Odette (Hates her guts. The usual subject)
D (Albus’s girl friend! Whose name I can’t remember…….)
Maggie (Don’t have a reason. Yet I feel like I should put her on the list)
Gemma (Don’t know how this is possible but she’s the only one that knows about Gen)


Now I shall explain myself. (I want to be a detective so we shall see if I am good or not!)

Odette, she would be the usual suspect in this story, so of course I would have to put her to my list of subjects. Plus since she is that ‘it’ girl then she would obviously have been invited to Charlies Birthday party, and no one knows why she hates Gen so much. No one knows why the person who did that to her hates her so much, especially since she was tortured.

D. Well she is Albus’s girlfriend, and Albus kinda loves Gen, so there you go. Motive. However she is far too sweet to do that to anyone. However looks can be deceiving and besides Odette and her little boy toy no one acts like they hate Gen.

Maggie. She was there at Charlie’s Party. Gen lost her. Then she was attacked. Makes sense. She has an attitude and if you double cross her….obviously she has no remorse in giving it right back to you. Look at Odette for example!

Gemma. I don’t know how she could come into the school since she is an adult, maybe to ‘check’ up on her. Seems to me like she liked Nate a lot, and she knows about Gen. According to Gen the person that tortured her knows about her.

So those are my suspects. Tell me if I at least have one of them. Not who just if they are on my list. PLEASE!

LOL My friend and I are going to ask my teacher if he has a pottermore so we can duel him! I really really REALLY hope he does!

LOVE YOUR STORY UPDATE NOW!

POOR Rory though, having to live with that. I can see why you don’t want him to have a girl now, because of how much it affects him. He feels and cares far too much.

Stupid her for not listening to him

Author's Response: Ahh, I'm sorry - it was just a revision + chapter image update of Chapter 18. I think my beta's gone away for a few days, but I'll have the next chapter up as soon as she sends it back to me. ;D

Oooh, I spy a detective in the making. Brilliant list of suspects, by the way - I don't think many people would suspect some of the people that you've mentioned, so that's very commendable indeed.

I'll just say that you're on the right track, and though there is a motive mentioned throughout the story, it's very concealed and I would be VERY surprised if you figured it out.

Hahaha - good luck with asking him. ;D

Aw, I know, poor Rory. It would have happened, though - he knew, even telling her, that she'd still play. Things can't change, unfortunately. :(

Thanks ever so much for the review, Morgan.

Hope you're well! xxx

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