Okay, so first I must inform you that I am still pondering the Kyle situation. And I have no answer yet. But I shall continue to ponder!
Next, I must say that I am very annoyed with myself for not getting the Jack/Rose/Titanic reference until you pointed it out to me. I LOVE THAT MOVIE. I cannot believe I didn't see the whole thing with the names. 'Tis very clever, I applaud you :D
Now I shall comment on Freddie because you know I love him. See, you wrote a chapter from James's POV, so I think you should write a chapter from Freddie's POV. Because /obviously/ he is the main character here... and I can just imagine the hilarity that will ensue. Oh, and HE'S IN LOVE WITH PENNY. Just saying. This chapter confirmed it, so don't tell me otherwise because I KNOW.
And now, finally: ZKLJZKLJAKJSDAK. Yes, ZKLJZKLJAKJSDAK. We were so close to the James/Natalie secret and then you kept cutting it off and GAH. But, I have a suspicion. I mean, I kind of thought it ages ago whenever Al last appeared in the story, but I thought it was completely absurd and would never be right. ANYWAY, when James was chatting with Lily about Al, I got to thinking again that he might be the reason that James and Natalie hit Splitsville. And then the suspicion kept nagging and growing and then James was talking about "giving permission to them" and Natalie not wanting "them" (James and Mystery Person, who is clearly Al in my head) to have a falling out like they did before and I was like "YES! I HAVE FIGURED IT OUT! ALL HAIL MY MAGNIFICENT BRAIN POWER!"
BUT THEN AL WAS KISSING SUMMER.
AND THEN MY THEORY ALMOST WENT FLYING OUT THE METAPHORICAL WINDOW.
AND NOW I AM CONFUSED.
BUT NATALIE WAS UPSET ABOUT SEEING AL.
AND I HAVE NO IDEA WHY SUMMER IS ALL OVER AL. I SHALL HAVE TO PONDER THIS AS WELL.
AND I AM OVER-ABUSING THE CAPS LOCK BUTTON RIGHT NOW.
YOU BETTER UPDATE SOON, OR ELSE I WILL WRITE MY ENTIRE NEXT REVIEW IN CAPS LOCK. YES, THAT IS A THREAT.
Oh, and I still love Connor ♥
Author's Response: you go ahead and ponder that kyle situation, darling. you go ahead and ponder. ponder until you're blue in the face, and then keep pondering. you can be a queen ponderer.
I LOVE THAT MOVIE TOO. best movie ever. i cannot wait to go and see it in 3D, i am so excited. thank you. i do like being applauded. so yeah, had to sneak in my sneaky little titanic references here and there. what would the story be without a couple of references?
freddie. freddie freddie freddie. i think it is impossible not love freddie, he is just so goshdarn adorable. ahaha, a chapter from freddie's point of view... i dont think that bloke has enough thoughts to fill an entire chapter, sorry love. it would probably be something along the lines of 'penny, biscuits, oh look at the shape of that cloud, fit girl, where is my handbag, penny, i looove my friends, what's for dinner?, should i buy some man lipstick to go with my handbag..., penny'. not really enough to fill a chapter.
ZKLJZKLJAKJSDAK!? honestly, ZKLJZKLJAKJSDAK!? i deserve a ZKLJZKLJAKJSDAK? wow. the james and natalie secret it in the next chapter -- i mean, everything is pretty much broken down and explained step by step. so you'll see everything. im not going to tell you if you're right, but the whole point of this chapter was for you to be able to guess what happened without being told. well, we shall see in the next chapter if i too should be hailing your magnificent brain power.
YES, AL IS KISSING SUMMER.
MAYBE YOU SHOULD READ STORIES AWAY FROM YOUR METAPHORICAL WINDOWS THEN, SO THEY CANT FLY OUT.
DONT BE CONFUSED.
NATALIE WAS UPSET ABOUT SEEING AL, YES.
YES, YOU WILL HAVE TO GO BACK TO YOUR PONDERING AND TRY TO FIGURE OUT WHY SUMMER WAS SNOGGING AL.
I AM ABUSING THE CAPS LOCK BUTTON BACK, LOVE.
RIGHT... THE MOST DANGEROUS THREAT EVER... AN ENTIRE REVIEW IN CAPS LOCK?! I AM SHAKING IN MY BOOTS.
thank youu :D i love connor soo much. nearly as much as jack :D
ellie :) xx