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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
Hi there!

I thought this was a fun and entertaining chapter. I love Victorie and Fred together as cousins. I think they bring a lot to any story. I also really like Teddy. He's like the wise mentor of the next generation, but a do gooder all the same.

I liked all of your descriptivness. It really helped paint a wonderful picture of the story that you were trying to tell. It also flowed well and I didn't see any messy transitions.

I really liked it when Victorie asked Fred "Who sets their watch slow?" It sounds like a very Fred thing to do and a very Victorie thing to say.

Overall, I thought it was great and I really enjoyed reading it.

Keep up the great work! =)

-SR17

Author's Response: Hey! I'm so sorry that it's taken me so long to answer this - I got a little busy and backed up with reviews, but I've been trying to chip away at them.

I'm really glad you liked this, and felt that it flowed smoothly. You know how new stories are - you can sometimes get a bit insecure. :P

Thank you so much for the review! I really appreciate it. :)


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