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Review:Allison says:
I can't even describe how much I adored this!!! It was such great fun to experience Albus's point of view. I've also decided that he and I are kindred spirits. We seem to have a similiar thought process.

Albus's confusion was adorable. He was incredibly awkward to the point of me cringing at his horrible excuses, but I still thought that it was realistic. One of my favorite lines was the one about him feeling as though he had opened the door to the leaky Cauldron and instead found a Hungarian Horntail. That one had me laughing out loud! It's a funny line, but also a really good simile for how Albus was feeling. I've been in that situation myself and I think it definitely describes the emotions and surprise involved.

And being the huge Rose/Scorpius shipper that I am, I loved all of the extra information about them. I mean, I figured that they would end up together, but it was nice to see that confirmed. And I don't feel as though you're giving away any information for "Curiosity" by bringing up as frequently as you did.

Part of me wants Albus to go for it and ask out Bridget, but I also think that after Claire mellowed out, they would do well together. Out of curiosity, who do you see him ending up with?

I thought this was exceptionally well written and I enjoyed every moment of reading! :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! :) It was kind of just sitting around my computer - I'd written it all up, but hadn't gotten around to editing it yet so that it was good enough to see the light of day. :P But I sat down, fixed it up, and I'm really happy with the way it came out.

I'm not sure who I see Albus ending up with - probably not Claire, because I think she's got a bit too much of an edge for him even mellowed out, but I'm not entirely sure he'll ever get up the confidence to ask Bridget out, especially once they both start Auror training.

I have a short story plunnie about that running around my head... but I'm going to make myself finish some of my current WIPs first. :P

Thank you for the review!


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