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Review:starryskies55 says:
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HAGRID!

I loved this. You've captured Hagrid's voice incredibly well, and I love that he got his original wand back- it was joined in my mind with Harry's own wand.

I don't like the way Harry used his power to get what he wanted- even though Hagrid was innocent. I think, if it was me I would have done the same, but I would have felt incredibly guilty. Although, the bloke he threatened didn't sound particularly innocent. He deserved to be put down a peg or two.

All your canon characters are superbly canon- I loved that Filch was continously telling McGonagall on the kids, and I absolutely adored the description of Hagrid's suit at the start- but who wipes their mouth on their tie? That's just weird and a little bit gross... oh, Hagrid.

Overall, brilliantly written and completely original idea for a one-shot :D

Author's Response: Hi, thanks for the tag!

Writing Hagrid was a bit challenging, so I'm glad you liked his dialog. I went back and did some reading to try to get his accent right.

Harry was put in what felt like a very untenable position. Everyone was counting on him, including Hagrid. I think Doge captured the trade-off well.

And I'm very glad that you found them all to be consistent with canon. That's how I write, so I'm really pleased with your reaction.

Thanks so much for reading and revewing!


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