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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
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I always enjoy a good Fred and George story and I really enjoyed this one.

I like the way you portrayed them as 5 year olds so anxious for the responsibilities and prestige of beng 6. Their personalities and interactions seemed very fitting for their age, but we alo saw strong traces of the characters they would become in the books.

I also liked how you managed to work in some canon details like Arthur's fondness for muggle objects. I think any young kid would be fascinated by a whipped cream can, and even more so if they had grown up in a magical family.

This was a feel good story and its off to a good start.

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for the review! Whipped topping is a most excellent fascination, isn't it??



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