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Review:baletgir says:
I loved the memory you used to open this chapter! It really set the scene. I do wonder though how Draco could so easily take their relationship out of hiding after he was just defending his actions, and almost called Hermione a mud-blood.

I think getting a beta could be really helpful to you. You've got a lot of typos. Most of them are odd spacing issues, so it just might be an issue of formatting when posting the chapter. Nothing that makes reading this difficult, but they are very noticeable. Having another person read over your work can really help a lot. I know that personally, no matter how many times I read my own writing I miss things, and a beta usually catches those things for me!

This sounds like its going to be a really cute fic. I am excited to see how Hermione and Draco handle being parents.

I cannot wait to read more! You've got a really good start to this here.
:)BaletGir

Author's Response: :D Thanks! Hmmm...maybe I should edit it and add that in? I just assumed readers would pick up their own reason! haha

I have one, I swear! I just haven't posted her polished versions yet!:/ I should probably do that!

Thanks!

xoxo

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