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Review:LittleWelshGirl99 says:
Wow, this was such a great chapter! My favourite yet I think.
I love how manipulative Fleur is, changing her personality in order to get her way. You described that part really well! And her French accent's cute (only just realised xD). It's not too over the top, but makes the character seem really real. My favourite line is definitely,

'Bill thought she must know that they were all staring at her derrière now… but maybe that was the point.' I laughed so much at this!

Also, the plot definitely gets loads more captivating in this chapter. I wanna know what happens! :P

I really do love this story, especially with all the french references! It's my favourite language. It was nice to see a letter from Gabrielle. Aww :)

Brilliant lottie! Really enjoyed it :)
Annon xox

Author's Response: Hehe thankyou!! 8D I love writing Fleur as so manipulative; it's so fun how she's so much in control of what's happening because of her, and I'm really glad you liked it! I didn't want anything to back-and-forth haha.

Yay, I'm really happy that it works for her! After all, she can't just adopt a British accent straight away, and I'm glad you see it as more depth-making (new word lol).

Hehe thankyou! :D That was one of my favourites to write ;) And yays!

Aww thanks! I love French too, it's so pretty and I can speak it more than any other foreign language which is good ;P Hehe glad you like her letters too; there'll be lots of them in future too!
~TGK

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