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Review:LovingMarauder says:
Thank you for updating,I couldn't wait anymore.xD

Sirius shared his secret with two girls,and that girls are Naomi's 'friends'.Perfect,huh?I think,that Narcissa said something to Meg (for example:She's just manipulating all of you.She doesn't care for you,but I would care and I cared.),so she get mad.-.-

AND NAOMI WAS A BIT OF WARM QUEEN!!!TO LILY!!!AND REMUS KNOWS THAT SHE HAS SOME EMOTIONS!!!Isn't that great?xD

That girl is really looking for trouble.If they killed Lulu H,they can kill Naomi Ivy too.It's not big deal.And please,don't say me that she's an auror too.'Cause,if she is,then you are the best author on Earth.(I'm sorry J.K. Rowling.)I could guess some things,but that-not.;)

I like Walter a lot,too.Can he be more present in story?=)

Don't kill Naomi,her father or somebody else in next chapter (I know,I know,that's impossible,but try xD).

10/10
Update soon.
x

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your lovely review!!
Yeah, Sirius had to admit that he loves her at some point and, since Rhea is his best friend, who better than her to help him out? Lily was just in the right place at the right time ;)

Hmm, I would love to be the best author in the world haha but sadly I am not. Naomi is not a real auror, but you are up for some surprises in the next chapter, that's for sure!

Can't promise I won't kill anybody but I'm not saying that I will either! You will have to read on ;)
Lots of love,
Kate


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